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Post by Secret on Jan 17, 2013 21:18:30 GMT -5
Annelise
All that was heard of the lovely essa known as Annelise was the barely audible sounds of her small hooves disturbing the dirt she walked 'upon. Soft, ragged sighs trickled out between her kissers. The mare that was Annelise was a unique one. Her build was.... different in a way, mixed with all the features of her breeds. Her frame was a bit like a delicate Thoroughbred, frailer then it would usually be. Next was her boa, which when held very high, curved in a slight Akhal-teke factor, and sitting upon her boa is her cranium, which is very slightly dished in an Arabian fashion. Past her sapphire gems were her audits, ever so slightly curved inward as a Marwari would wear them. Annelise's tapestry was long, strands growing at different lengths from a child hood accident but long nonetheless. Her cream tapestry went past her shoulders, and her forelock was long and thick, with a slight, natural wave to it, usually hiding parts of her sapphire orbs. Her plume was filled with slightly darker strands, and just barely brushed the ground she walked upon. Her medium length legs that carried her gracefully were that of her mixed breeds and she was unsure as to which they should come from, but legs were nearly all the same. Her coloring of course came from the Rocky Mountain Horse bloodlines, allowing the silver gene to sneak through into her silver dun coat. Sighing, Anne began to frantically wonder about her family. Was Alonso looking for her? Did they think she had betrayed and abandoned them? Did they think she was dead? Oh wait. She was dead, wasn't she? Twisting her boa so her cranium faced her back, Annelise saw the silvery feathered wings that sat upon her back. She was an angel? But why, Annelise had never done anything too good. She deserved to have just died and been over with, Annelise didn't believe she deserved to go to heaven and be an angel. What about Maria, her darling daughter? What about the poor filly who was.... Annelise couldn't force herself to think about that word, but silently, silver tears ran from her sapphire orbs down her soft cheeks. Sighing, Annelise shook her tiara, soon, her thoughts and self pity were interrupted as she was hit in the facade by a branch from one of the bushes around her. Oh how fantastico..
Thinking, Annelise analyzed her situation as she forgave nature for hitting her in the face and went on with her stroll. Maybe, the other equines about didn't speak her language. Annelise was bilingual, she spoke Spanish fluently as well as English, who knew where she learned English, but she did. Though, growing up speaking Spanish, Annelise had a thick Hispanic accent, making her tones soft and exotic. The poor essa was terribly confused, why was she here? Slowly, the situation dawned on her, running out into the land, blinded, falling down the mountain side, gashes, a horrid throbbing on the side of her cranium, then a crimson curtain seeping down over her orbs. Then, light. Eternal light. Next, she woke up here, not in these exact lands but in this place. Heaven. With wings and a new destiny, Annelise had been blind to the turmoil beginning and she still was, she had to meet who ever was in charge, or she would be lost in the heat of battle. Completely confused and in danger. Annelise could be a warrior, a fighter, but it wasn't really one of her favorite out comes. Annelise was more about peace, making others laugh, forgiveness. Her wisdom and intelligence had led her to be a great leader, being the Queen of her old herd, Katalonia, she had learned. Her father Santanio had taught her much, and along with her forgiveness, generosity, and kind heart including her intelligence, she had brought peaceful times to the dark land. That was, before Alonso came and she had a child, whom was too sickly to grow better, then passed in her sleep, next thing she knew, she had basically killed herself and was now here. What a great leader and friend she had been. Annelise huffed out a breath and mentally sent them apologies, thanks, and peace, foolishly hoping that they would receive the messages, but Annelise knew better. Her sapphire orbs shot up word, looking at the canopy of trees that created dark shadows across her pelt, it was beautiful here, lush and earthen. Forest and wild in a way, a soft, gentle smile caressed her kissers, how breathtaking the other lands must be if this one was as well. Awe filled her eyes, she was aweful. Full of awe. Looking down, the contessa continued her soft trot, not letting her gems be her sense, but rather listening to the world around her. That was a mistake. Before she knew it, Annelise hit a mass of body ahead of her and her delicate frame went tumbling down to the ground. Rolling her delicate bodice slightly, Annelise stared upside down at the painted hide of a stallion. Shakily raising her self, she stumbled to the side slightly, stretching her legs out, trying to stable herself like a new born foal would.
If the red hue of a blush could have been there, it would have been spread all over Annelise's cheeks. Her sapphire blues that were surrounded with dark and thick lashes opened wide in complete and utter embarrassment, soon, her soft vocals with her thick Spanish accent came flooding from her maw. "Oh senor me disculpo! Deberia haber mira donde iba!" Before common sense hit her in the facade she began to speak again. "Lo siento mucho, por favor perdoname." Then, it dawned upon her. This male might not speak Spanish. Stupid Annelise. Scolded her mind. Lowering her head respectfully, Annelise looked into the mismatched eyes of this fellow. "I'm terribly sorry sir, I should have looked as to where I was going. I'm so sorry, please forgive me." Casting her eyes downwards, embarrassment was racking her body, first she had collided into him, and then had began uttering apologies in a foreign language. Could it be any worse? Maybe. "I'm Annelise, again, I apologize it's all my fault.I'm so foolish, I didn't hurt you, did I?" Her sapphire gaze ran over him, he was quite handsome, but she was more concerned of his well being then his looks. Oh could this day get any more embarrassing? Probably.
Status: Complete Muse: BLEECK Word Count: 1105 OOC: MRRR -stabs post- COME ALIVE. Magic isn't helping me today. It will get better I promise, I'm just terrible at starters. WHAT A TERRIBLE PLACE TO END IT OFF. I suck. Sorry, but so excited! <3 Translations Oh pido disculpas, senor! Yo deberia estar buscando a donde voy. Oh I'm sorry sir! I should be looking where I am going. Lo siento mucho, por favor perdoname. I'm sorry, please forgive me.
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Post by immy on Jan 17, 2013 22:23:34 GMT -5
All wrapped around the painted stags mind was confusion, questions, and fear of what had become of him after a cold hard death dealt by enraged hooves. Question ring loudly in the psyche “what happened why am I here I barely lived? Though granted my acts merited blessing, but why only me where are my father and mother were they just not as just as me? Who did this? Who wants me here as…..” just then did his blue and brown eyes showed white irises in startlement, at the painted body unblemished from the rash beating resulting in death. Shaking it off the stallion paid attention to where exactly his hooves were taking their owner, upon soil he had claimed for who knows what reason nothing was making sense to the horse at the moment other than the fact his breathe was still intact.
Castiel full of worry dodged under branches through the forested area looking around hoping to find another soul who knew what was going on, and where exactly had he claimed as his own land. The heart knew it was in a vacantly familiar place as of it was truly where it all begin not on as was thought originally hard earthen floor. Occasionally the young horse let out a neigh calling “ mother farther anyone” only to hear the trees surrounding him groan strangely speaking something part way understood by the chest nut ears upon the white forehead of his. It only caused slight annoyance when bark seemed to be the only thing to respond to a call, and retorting it the white mixed chestnut stag shook around his light head. The pearl white man and forelock flapped about with the motion in mannerism of a flag, as the pearl tail flowed behind. After a few miles of this process the stud stopped his heart snuck thinking of his parents why didn’t they pass over to this realm with him?
Before that thought could go more complex cast was interrupted being slammed into by a mare that tumbled down to the ground staring up at him with sweet sapphire eyes offering a kindness. The stallion looked over the silver dun fe as a smile came upon his face something he thought would end up sullen when all was said and done. The impact had thrown his balance off, but the paint regained it quickly finding more concern towards the lady than one’s own well being. Scrambling to her hooves it was apparent in the mare’s features she was embarrassed then spat a language he couldn’t even begin to understand, yet her voice thick in the language was so beautiful his ears wish never to stop hearing the lyrics of such a wonderful lady. All he could give in return was a dull look at the words saying “I don’t understand” after that the fe spoke English giving a name and a apology the stud responded slight snickering “ I am Castiel a pleasure lady Annelise are you ok ? you did not hurt me ,but did I you? Its not your fault pardon me I just have been in a daze since….no matter do you know where we are”
muse" fantastic
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Post by Secret on Jan 18, 2013 1:12:28 GMT -5
Annelise
Truth be told, Annelise's head was spinning. When she fell and rolled over, her cranium had bashed upon the ground slightly. Blinking her sapphire pools, Annelise tilted to the side slightly, a bit dizzy. Her left hoof moved over slightly, catching herself as she began to fall to the left. Looking politely at the stud Annelise gave her head ten seconds to cut it out before the contessa let her gaze give the male a good look. Her mind, as usual, sucked up the details. The first thing her gaze picked up was his eyes. One blue, one brown, the brown having some blue in it. Annelise silently noted that she was a bit taller than him, and next moved onto his coloring. He had a chestnut base coat, splattered with the alabaster markings of a tovero. His build was of his paint breed, and that was all she could see so far, including his alabaster mane and tail. He was handsome, that was true, but her mind ventured away from that, focusing on how she had just threw herself into him by accident and had screwed up her first meeting since her time on the Earth. Alonso had been similar to this, though he had been a grullo tovero and taller than herself. Alonso had ice blue eyes filled with a certain stern era that still suggested a young childish heart. Annelise expected herself to feel something tug at her from the thoughts of Alonso, but no such thing happened. Perhaps it was the fact that her feelings were faded for him, as the love has slowly diminished over the time after they had Annelise. Alonso had decided to take out his rage and confusion on Anne, whom would have no such thing tolerated and they had begun to fight terribly. It was true, they had began to give up on their love, not for their child but for themselves. Then something occurred to her then and there, this stallion had spoken to her. All she had done was stare at him blankly for a few seconds like an idiot. Her mind snapped focus you idiot!.
I don't understand. is what registered in her mind first. A smile graced her lips, so he did speak English. Watching him, Annelise allowed herself to stay in one minded subject which was this stallion and all he had to say. Listening to him, she caught his slight snickering. Annelise didn't know whether to be offended or what, but decided to just let it slide. I am Castiel a pleasure to meet you lady Annelise, are you ok? You did not hurt me, but did I you? It's not your fault pardon me I've just been in a daze since.... no matter, do you know where we are? Annelise debated her answers to his questions and words. After a few seconds, her vocals filled with the rich, thick accent of her Spanish heritage crept out in surely. "Nice to meet you Castiel. Oh yes, I am fine, just a bump on the head due to my own actions." Pausing momentarily, Annelise breathed before continuing in her answer. "Oh no si- I mean Castiel, it's my own fault, walking around with my eyes closed, what was I thinking." Rich Spanish vocals continued onwards on their voyage from her maw. "Not the name of this particular land Castiel. But I know that this place is in heaven, where we are. The reason we are in heaven is due to the fact that we are angels and I don't know your story but I suppose I have died." Suddenly, shock filled her sapphire orbs, she was completely new to this world up here, but knew all that as if she lived by it. "Castiel..." The way she spoke his name was making it sound Spanish and enticing, drawling the word out slightly with rich Hispanic tones. She continued "I'm slightly confused... I'm so new to all of this but knew that information. I just don't understand why I'm here." The excitement and awe that was in her sapphire pools faded slightly, and confusion and heartbreak set in again. Was her life really gone? Her daughter, her family, her solid being? Sighing, the contessa looked down, wondering how she would find a way to come to terms with this. She was all alone basically, besides the presence if Castiel before her. She felt at odds with the world, completely and utterly lost.
Status: Complete Muse: okay ish Word Count: 746 OOC: Sorry I finished it on my phone. Yay I'm excited. Translations
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Post by immy on Jan 18, 2013 21:08:43 GMT -5
While the silver dun lady gathered herself recollecting thoughts, and examining the painted stud he did likewise in return. His eyes scanned the famine’s body noting a lovely mix mash of several breeds blended into a one linage her face was dished in Arabian fashion. The frame overall was dainty in thoroughbred manner frail almost comparable to one of nature’s finest rare flowers so full of beauty, yet so delegate one could never cause what lay beyond the pretty petals. It would be a fool’s mistake to underestimate someone based off of build for it did not give a full story shallow was the tale it would tell, but one feature on anyone that told all was the eyes. Sapphire gems had belonged to the lady, and out of curiosity the stallion find himself lost in them, so much so his jaw could have been gaping open slightly, but not to seem too intrigued the stud had to tone it down some. Still looking at her, but less detail orientated allowed his mind to wonder; as usual it came to be confused trying to grasp any concept of what was going on this placed a vice grip on his heart wondering what happened to the rest of a loving family. The stud hoped highly he would see them in this beautiful land of tranquility something the sire and dam of the stag had dreamt of obtaining for so long. Castiel hearing once again that lovely exotic accent from Ann brought a deep smile on his face, and kept him from trancing off into a confusion that thought process was comparable to chasing one’s own tail in a circle never catching it. The next words however hit hard like a back hand to the face sending the stud’s features into utter disarray lost to worry, but also hinted at happiness at the fact he would never have to endure earth again unless he chose to intervene on behalf of mortal souls, which most likely would end up being the case. Shaking off confusion the stallion spoke “No it wasn’t your fault madam I was just as equally unfocused as were you, but regardless glad you ran into me” finding that his tone of voice had altered into something compelling and authoritive, though it was not meant to be so made it all the more awing, but made him stop speaking then sighing he picked backup saying her name with endearment “ Annelise” then stopped once more still trying to sound as if his stuff was still altogether “ Heaven the place my parents dreamt and told me to live for, but how short lived my life was now I am a servant of the peaceful realm of the creator. Fear not nor worry not fellow angel for we if you would allow can embrace this together…it would do us both good not be confused all alone. Besides I claimed a piece of this estate of the lord for I felt compelled to maybe you could become a part of it a home within the home?” finishing the stallion bowed slightly saying once more her name with endearment added “ your voice your accent is lovely”
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